When
Jay gets to the Church and begins to question the priest, the priest is very
dismissive at first and won’t answer any of Jay’s questions. After a while Jay
begins to become very agitated with the Priest and begins to demand to have his
questions answered. The Priest reluctantly gives in because he can see that Jay
is passionate and knowledgeable. But, the Priest warns him that the information
that Jay is about to be told should remain a secret for the safety of himself
and others.
The
priest tells Jay old stories of vampires that had really happened and describes
horrific details and describes the Vampires and terrifying monsters that lust
over blood. He also tells Jay that Vampires really do exist but he should never
try to find one as Vampires are not how they are described in the story books.
They are much worse...
Jay ends up trying to gather more and more information... However he ends up finding out more than he bargained for!
www a good set up with clear potential, the use of religion as a backdrop is powerful and the locations suggested are also good.
ReplyDeleteebi think about what we discussed last week about the priest being the vampire, perhaps in denial, using his religious faith to fight his vampiric urges. This could itself be of course seen as a metaphor for something else...
Can you also submit a script for the opening sequence. 3 pages maximum.
I have some good idea now for the priest being the vampire.. I didn't want to mention it in the pitch though because wanted to leave it as a surprise for the class.
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